The presentation in my opinion in my oral presentation
has many resources. The oral presentation includes the Prezi and one video to
the Hindu weddings. All information that has the Prezi is related to ours
topics. But the one of the errors that the duration of the oral presentation.
My body language and eye contact be being nonexistent.
Because I’m put very nervous and I didn’t look to the people and I only look my
paper that have in my hands. And didn’t doing any gestures to hold the attention
of my audience.
The structure my oral presentation has a good
structure, because each one walks about the one topic. But I didn’t use the
discourse markers to mark my ideas. For example Amanda talks about the Gypsy and
Hindu weddings, and I talk about the Jewish and Chinese weddings.
The content in my oral presentation is good, but I didn’t
sufficient study the phrase and didn’t have short phrases for me memorizing. And
didn’t explains correct and clear my schoolmates. And the schoolmates didn’t understand
the Chinese weddings.
The language in my oral presentation has very poor and
inappropriate.
The pronunciation and intonation of my oral
presentation has very poor, although I helped Marta for the presentation. But I
put very nervous and didn’t can pronounced correct the words.
Final mark: 3.5
In the second oral presentation I needed much
preparation and much practice for make a good oral presentation.
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