Oral presentation self-evaluation

Name: Alexandra Elena Lungu 

Topic: eating desorders. 

•  Presentation (10%): in my presentation uses various resources, for example the Prezi with good images and one video. In someone’s commentaries to the evaluation does for my classmates, his writing that my presentation is good photos. The resources can be focused on my topic and also are very clear and realistic. I’m talking during approximately 5 minutes, but my big problem is that depend very much on the paper. In a lot of commentary to the evaluation my classmates wrote that I’m reading. 
• Body language and eye contact (10%): body language and eye contact is one that my biggest problems in the oral presentations. I have this problem because I’m very insecure and constantly I have looked in the paper. I’m preparing the oral presentation, but when go in front the class I’m getting really nervous and constantly look the paper. 
• Structure (10%): I think that my oral presentation has a good structure because I can explain what are the eating disorders, after I explain the differences and most common types of eating disorders. In second place I explain the causes of eating disorders and the treatment and also my oral presentation have a good conclusion. Finally, I show a video. In my opinion all the parts of my oral presentation are important. 
• Content (40%): the content of my oral presentation is good because I explain the more important facts of eating disorders. In some commentaries of my classmate I can read that my topic in good and original because in the class nobody talk about this topic.
• Language (20%): the last year I improve, but in this oral presentation haven’t continued to improve. Because of nerves, I have made mistakes in the pronunciation and the some structures of the sentences. I think that my vocabulary is rich because I can search in the dictionary works. But my problem is that I do too much long sentences and I didn’t memorize these.
• Pronunciation and intonation (10%): I have mistakes, for example: culture, treated, medical care and more.

What have you done well? What do you need to improve?

I need to improve more thinks my oral presentation. I do a good Prezi and a good structure, but I improve the content, body language and eye contact and the pronunciation. I need to make a short sentence for memorizing the contents and present without seeing the paper. In the second trimester, I have improved and I need more preparation. Also, I need control my insecurity and my nerves. 

https://prezi.com/espdtjrq_1pi/eating-disorder/